April 19, 2011 » P.O.M.K.I.Z.H.B.G.A.I.D.I. / A.T.W.T.A.S.H.N.T.B.A.U.A.
Just wrote this. It's a rough draft of what I suddenly had on my mind in a totally..well, wrong place. I thought about a new series, with a limited number of fragments, the title of which would also be a piece of poetry. And each line of the title piece would represent a title of one of the other pieces.
Given that it's a draft, this might be changed many more times, perhaps its title will end up being much different from what it is now. But the idea is there.
Also, form-wise, this looks a lot like the piece that eventually started my creativity outbreak in 2009 - with one difference: it actually makes sense.
P.O.M.K.I.Z.H.B.G.A.I.D.I.
Posle duge noći,
oni hodaju,
mi trčimo,
kroz neobično toplo leto
i jesen globalne opasnosti,
zvezde sijaju svetlije,
horizonti su osvojeni,
brojevi su smešni,
granica nema,
ali sve pokazuje znake nošenja
i neće potrajati još mnogo
dok se ne završi
i ponovo bude mrak.
_______________________________
A.T.W.T.A.S.H.N.T.B.A.U.A.
After a long night,
They walk,
We run,
Through a particularly hot summer,
And the autumn of global threat.
Stars shine brighter,
Horizons have been reached,
Numbers are ridiculous,
There are no boundaries,
But it's all wearing out
And it won't be long
Until it ends
And it's dark again.
Iva is the owner of this blog. She's a web designer who loves poetry way too much and won't stop writing it. She also runs a couple of other websites, such as this one.
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Nisam ti rekao da mi je tvoja poezija skroz neobična i da mi se sviđa što nas tako provodiš kroz neke simbole koje sami moramo odgonetnuti. Ko zna šta si ti imala u glavi dok si pisala ovo, ali je slika koju sam ja zamislio po pažljivom iščitavanju skroz apokaliptična. Ne znam da li je to zato što sam i sam u takvoj fazi...
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