August 10, 2010 » Ražalovani patuljak / Unmade Dwarf
Lives of a clipping, Wrong Star |
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This seems pretty simple, a 4x3, with an actual common rhyme in both versions. I am not sure if "unmade" was the adjective I needed, I was looking for one describing a person whose duty/honour/permission was revised and taken away.
The story, in the global way of reading it, isn't any different than Revenge. A ridiculous, back row character of nearly zero importance, yet bearing a very powerful name totally opposed to its role is threatening those around it and results in inciting force of the Wrong Star story.
However, it can also represent the rising action/climax of the A/B story. For a change, not the actual climax. Up On The Roof is its only match in that sense, as well as one (for now) non-Wrong Star p..m, Nightingale.
Ražalovani patuljak
Samo ti misli da sam te ranije povredio,
ali kad te povredim tako to bude očigledno,
znaćeš da nikad nisi bila toliko povređena.
Samo ti misli da pre nisam obraćao pažnju,
ali jednom kad se ni ne okrenem,
to će biti najveća priča ikad ispričana.
Samo ti misli da stvari ne shvatam ozbiljno,
ali jednom kad skoro i zaboravim da postoje,
neki drugačiji ulov u grmu će da spava.
Samo ti misli da me zadovoljavaju jeftine ponude,
ali jednom kad nasednem na onu najjefiniju,
to će biti moja večna sramota...mislim, slava.
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Unmade Dwarf
You only think that I hurt you before,
But once I visibly hurt you,
It will be the most obvious hurt in the world.
You only think I didn't pay attention before,
But once I don't even turn around,
It will be the greatest story ever told.
You only think I don't take things seriously,
But once I almost forget they exist,
You will be seeing a different game.
You only think I settle for cheap deals,
But once I've fallen for the cheapest,
It will be my eternal shame...I mean, fame.
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"You only think that I hurt you before,
But once I visibly hurt you,
It will be the most obvious hurt in the world.
You only think I didn’t pay attention before,
But once I don’t even turn around,
It will be the greatest story ever told."
So true, people are selfish and they will only think their pains and desperations are the biggest ones. I always try to look for people going through worst things that I am to stop moaning about things, I think is one of the way out of sadness and the feeling of impotence!