May 25, 2010 » Zenice su im prepune sunca / So Much Sun In Their Pupils
Forever Nine, Lives of a clipping |
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This started off as a Wrong Star p..m...hence the other side of the fence motif. However, it ends up in the Forever Nine hopelessness. Just like the most of the Forever Nine p..ms, there's a question the observer/narrator isn't able to respond to at the very end. Also, I'm not really into such short forms, so this was challenging. Only six lines. ONLY SIX LINES. O_o
Zenice su im prepune sunca
Vidim te kako se šetaš s druge strane ograde,
vidim te kako se šetaš Ništavijom
I niko drugi to ne vidi, zenice su im prepune sunca
A ja ne znam šta se dešava,
da li gledam nekoga ko se bori protiv vetrenjača
ili nekoga ko će do kraja samo da bunca?
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So Much Sun In Their Pupils
I see you walk on the other side of the fence,
I see you walk around the Nowhereland
Nobody else can see it, so much sun in their pupils.
And I don't know what's going on,
Am I watching someone who'll talk gibberish until the end
Or someone who's fighting windmills?
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